Artist-poetry is art, right?
Mother- of a 7 yr old boy
Young- im only 24
Rhymes-are my favorite type of poems
Oblivious-still don't know everything allthough i like to think i do
Writing-is my life, without it i would go crazy
selfish-i spend way to much time worrying about my self instead of others
Extraordinary- i try to write deep things
Loving- i try to be loving to my family and my friends
Laughs-laughing is a good medicine
Author notes
acrostic of my name
A contest entry
- March Acrostic Madness by alaskanamber.
425 points, ended April 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Form Contest: Acrostic - Names by Little Eagle.
600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Thank you for your entry
Well done. I am sure that describes you to a tee lol.
Good job on the form, I like the way you set it up. With one word for each letter and then describing that word and how it relates to you.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
Pretty good Amy. Thanks for the insight into the mind of a fellow poet. And poetry is the art of words painted on a mental easel.
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poetry is definitely art...I like poems that give a glimpse into the life of the writer. You've done so with this one. Well done.
Rory -
Interesting fill-outs
I thought you were trying to run through everything in this acrostic, but hey it sounds like it's your real name so you're explaining life. The first few lines are a sweet info with a little personal humor showing through like especially "Young- im only 24" reflective motherly, and the first line as well. I wonder why you say, "Rhymes-are my favorite type of poems" lol, just thought I'd add that for comedy though maybe you're hinting that you do it mostly... but not in this one.
Nice concept at letter O, how it can feel special to think we have all knowledge, but then we have to back off to reality...
haha, you're like me when you say you try to make your poems sound like they're full of thought, but maybe aren't from personal feelings even. That's what one of the lines in my acrostic turns out to be similar to. Even though it may hiding the person we really are if we aren't typically deep, it's funny that I can relate.
But, then the next emphasis might then mean that you try to do what you want, however, not always does it flow.
Descriptive of ideas,
PIA-K -
Well that is interesting. lol. I agree with the last statement about laughter. Keep up the good work and I will be in touch as always.
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The fact that you admit that you can be selfish is notable. We can all be selfish, very few of us are willing to admit it. Thanks for the glimpse into your life. Hopefully your son learns from you how amazing poetry is, it's a great way to express unspeakable emotions. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I like this poem, I forget what the form's called, But I like it. I should do one with my user name and then my real name. Good job.
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