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a rocky carpet



crushing sea shells to scatter

upon the shore of a soul darkened

by stolen pleasures and seeking a

path to love and redemption

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  • Celticjedi
    April 7, 2008

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    Wow...this is a very beautiful piece! While reading it and even AFTER reading it you need to pause for a minute a let the imagine sink in. Great work! Thank you for entering. Good luck and keep it up.
    ~Cj