One little whisper every night
One little hug every morning
One little smile every time i look at you
One little tear drop when you are sad
Tiny little fingers holding my hand
Soft little curls lying on my blossoms
Gentle giggles sounding so melodious
Deep brown eyes just like your dad
Baby, you have made
MY LITTLE WORLD
SO BEAUTIFUL!
Author notes
Mothers' world changes so much when her child comes in her life. The imagination itself makes me so happy!
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE QUICKIE QUICKIE by Three Doves.
700 points, ended March 13, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tired of HM's (X) by PatheticKt.
550 points, ended August 26, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'll be honest, at the first stanza, I thought I shouldn't be reading anymore (although, the lines were penned adorably and all ^^) but when I got to the second stanza- wow!
Definitely like the image pictured in my head from the content there
Overall, this is a nice write; not bad at all
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Fantastic
The joy of motherhood expressed well in your words changing your life from the moment of conception. Thank you for sharing this precious moment. Best wishes in life and the contest.
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