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[ Happy Birthday to you. ]

Happy Birthday to you.
[Doesn't that seem a little boring?]
This song always starts out the same.

Happy birthday to me.
[I like this a bit better.]
The day is about me, after all.

Happy birthday dear...
[Dear? What are we, Grandparents?]
Happy birthday dear, here's a quarter

Happy birthday to you.
[it's not the same without the chachachas]
Happy birthday, dear.

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRIDGET!!

The AP name: SpiceRack
The Actual name: Tessa Noelle

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Nice to take these lines apart and add that little extra as you have done in this poem. Congratulations on getting the bronze in this contest.


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 7, 2008

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    What a lovely poem to wish her a happy birthday on her special day. A lovely poem for me to read. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 7, 2008
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    This is cute. Its funny. I likes it.


  • Jeneralix
    March 6, 2008

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    HAHAHAA Noiiicee... Seriously. This is hilarious!!
    I heart this.. really and truly!
    She'll love this one. Great job! I'll come back and comment more later. Promise