your little lies
little spies
deceiving
appeasing
sit right down
across from us
you're deception
you pretend you're alright
pretend you're everything
but you're nothing
you're deception
telling us lies
never
lie
always
deceiving
somewhat
appeasing
deception walks in
with a fake smile again
hiding the truth behind that mask
not depressed
only upset
always hiding away
telling lies
can make such a hard life
deception is sitting across the table from us
always keeping it's eyes on ours
Author notes
well i dont know how it ended up, but i kind of like it but im weird like that.
A contest entry
- "Deception is sitting across the table from us" by carmel apple.
380 points, ended March 25, 2008, 13 entries
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that was pretty much amazing! It reminds me of "crushcrushcrush" by Paramore........"they taped over your mouth scribbled out the truth with their lies, your little spies". Kind of how it sounded when I first heard it.
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You're not weird at all... it ended up beautiful.
Ken
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i know its way late, but thanks for the comment on my poem. i honestly dont know why i didnt reply sooner.
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Huh. Good
Wish i could write like that.
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hmmmm
This is a very good poem. Makes me think of a song. I like how you eneded it on a a part that you later can come back and add to it.
IF you ever add more to it let me know!!!
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