I am a Sagittarian
a female one at that
with the fantasy
of centaurs
galloping across my mind.
I imagine their flights of fancy
even painted a mural once
a female of course
half woman half horse
on the basement wall
at the funky house
on Madison.
Author notes
will probably be editing and adding more later
A contest entry
- Centime by ea.
390 points, ended March 11, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Your talents abound!
Sounds like a basement I'd like to visit - my Mother used to paint murals - with a white horse - of course!
Beautiful poetry & tale!
Tang
*chumpy
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lol, I didn't say it was a good mural, but inspired yes...that's cool your mother used to paint murals!
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I mistook Centime for a satyr and it wasn't until I was nosing around in the wiki that I realized she was four-legged; there are female satyrs in the wiki but no mention of the female centaur - which I find fascinating, so I tip my hat to your Madison mural. I confess I never noticed that Sag was a centaur before either so this write opened my eyes! I'll check again to see what edits you make. Thanks for the entry!
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