Lilting
musical
notes of fancy, quite fine in
the
elegant
night, her
float meet ears,
to tucked
under a feathered
masque.
Her
tresses
fall
in curls
to
frame
her l l l
delicate l l l l l l l
face. l l l l l l l l l
l l l behind l l l
l Hidden velvet, l
Eyes O purple,
blue, green.
and
Sweet
burdened
lips, of secrets
kept,
hold
promises
of kisses
dreamt.
And there,
dancing
close
is
her
Angel,
her
guardian,
her love.
To dream His
a dream curious
is not to bow
see a thing, is made
but to live with elegant grace
a dream and he strokes
is a very dear thing. her cheek
and kisses her face.
"The masque, but our
And my Dear, over now, story
is
the is
mask just
came starting
off to
revealing shape
her it's
form.
Author notes
Option #3 "Love takes off masks we know we can't live without, but cannot live within."
A contest entry
- Options [PIF] by Beauty Of Silence.
650 points, ended March 19, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Take it as it is, it's not changing.
Comments
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I couldn't really picture the beginning of this poem... but towards the end i could see the heart (pretty obvious huh?) Anyways, good job with this piece! Thanks for giving it a go... i guess it turned out pretty well!
It was a little confusing the first time i read it, but then when i read it again. it all made sense! Your words were really lovely and they all fit in together with this piece very well! Congrats on this masterpiece!
Thanks for entering my contest! Best wishes
Ps. Pls put your options choice in the AN! and this piece exceeded 30 line... but i guess i can let it go, considering the fact that its a shape poem!


