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Quicksand

I've fall in;
The quicksand takes it hold
There's no way that I can win.

Maliciously it pulls me down
Engulfing my every inch
Swallowing me without a sound.

Ingesting all my happiness, my control
my dignity and my self worth:
my entire life, on the whole.

But I don't struggle to escape
Fearing the quicksand's grip would tighten
I guess I might as well just wait.

The harder I try
The quicker I will die
All I did was fall in love.


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