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I Suppose (in progress)

I gave you letters
and I gave you thiiiiiiingss
and I gave my heart...
well (I gave you) every-thingggggggg

and I gave you your surface
and I gave you're depth, you see
all you need: too no
is that you're everything to me


this is our life
am I who you want me to be
this is your life
or do I drown
in my company's misery ?


Aye,
are you who
I want me to be ?

I ?
am I who I'm
s'posed t'Be ?

what really;
here
is the mystery

well we are the mystery
herein lies M'history


n I don't remember
and you really can't see
how I'm presently acting
& how it's-posed two bee ?



NV


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  • boilerjim
    March 6, 2008

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    Thoughtful

    Keep on going, my foot was tapping and my heart was believing. Keep on going......pleeeeeease! Thanks for the thoughts and words.