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Acrostic of Life

Trust me, I'll hurt you
Eager to fall in love
Always searching fot that one true love
Relieved to find it
Sorry I nearly threw it away
Oblivious to the truth behind the lies
Forever grateful to that one who always saves me
Anticipating the day that we finalize the obvious
Sick of hurting and being hurt
I found my fairy tale love
The one who was always there and never gave up
Him, who makes it worth while- my one and only

Author notes

I guess I'm not to good at these/

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  • alaskanamber
    March 7, 2008

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    See but practice only makes you better. When you said fairy tale love I pictured a prince on a white horse which tells me that this has spots with good imagery. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    This is great, no need to put yourself down, it's a really good write. Your screen name intrigues me. Well done with this. Best of luck xxx