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Dark Rhym

I wish for the Darkness to come.
Hoping it will carry me away to a new home
To a place where there isnt a thing called Pain
Where someone can be truely Happy.

I wish for those Dark Wings to take away my Life
To carry me forever and always into the Night
To keep me away from Happyness and the Light
To let me lye in wait

I wish to be in Limbo
A place of not Life but not Death
A place where there is no Happyness but no Pain
A place where one doesnt have to worry about Sorrow
or the Light of tomarrow.

I wish to fly on my own Black Wings.
To a place where the Dark Demon Sings
A haunting tune it is said will be played
As the time of Life and Death will be weighed

A place so wonderful and Dark
It would be like a walk in the park
You would never feel the Pain
While you stand in the Rain

A glorious moment it will be
Just wait and see
A Figure in Black
Will take you back

To the place where there is never ending Dark
Oh how i wish to be there in the Dark
With the Dark Figure from my Dreams
A glorious Figure with the Darkest wings

Together forever
He will hold and love me forever
In his strong arms I will stay
So we can fly away
To a Darker Day
His prisoner I will be
Just you wait and see

Till then I sit and await for that Dreary Day
When that Figure all in Black will collect his pay
Then he will carry me away
To a place where we can stay

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  • Rachel21
    March 7, 2008
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    this wasn't exactly what i had in mind, but the meaning of the poem is good.good luck