mother nature cried a million tears
separating the lands between us
what will we do to bridge the gap
can we ever get back together
a million tears have been shed
relieving the pain from heartache
washing away the family jewels
desolving ancestral records
our queen is filling the moat
with a million tears over and over
may the prince be a king
a knight fondly remembered
from the shores of my abode
i salute the distant son
the oars are at the ready
to cross the million tears
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AP Father
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A contest entry
- Please be a part of my AP family by Zenda-Lokki.
450 points, ended March 21, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This piece is strongly written makes you think of things from a different perspective and I think at times in life we need to be made aware of how our thinking process drifts through different stages of our lives. Congrats on your gold win it was greatly deserved
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This is heart touching.
This poem made my heart feel sad and hurt, it was the last verse I found it so emotional it maes you say wow!!! great heart felt poem, sad.Thank you for sharing this beautiful write.
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A well deserved winner. I am fast becoming a real fan of yours.
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I LOVED IT
Keep up the amazing work and good luck in the contest.
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Such an amazingly great write. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Would be great to have an AP Father
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I solute the distant son the oars are at the ready to cross the million tears...sighs...what a beautiful pledge of honor winner for sure!
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