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Four lines of deception

Knowledge, grief and hate summarized
Youth wasted under the scorn of inhumanity
Obstructed by vain, fake warmth

Nothing worthy for the scum itself

Author notes

My screen name doesn't leave me with many options.

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  • alaskanamber
    March 6, 2008

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    A wise man once said we are only limited by our own imagination. When I asked for an acrostic of your screen name I was looking forward to the short ones as well as the long ones. I think you did wonderfully. THanks for entering and good luck.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    This is great, very few letters to work with but an amazingly penned poem. Well done. Best of luck in the contest. xxx


  • marSh-faiRytaLe
    March 6, 2008

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    though you have only 4-letter screen name, it's still great! I think it would be more great if you'll have a longer screen name. heheh! good luck!