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HaHaHa!

Great times I have,  lets start them rollinG
A festivious parade in joy’s rampaging seA
Right here and right now the parties a stiR
Breaking all the  rules, but not being dumB
All come and read, this is my magna cartA
It declares I’ve  no rules  set for you and I
Try GARBAIT’S WILD Side, in my party haT

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This was different. Kind of fun.

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  • Bams
    April 3, 2008

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    disciplined style where attitude can relax...

    this appears as accordion almost with lively unlikeness of lettered font and focal ends

    then I read of celebration to push each other button's positively I gather increasingly yet where it isn't absolute for a good laugh so "Breaking all the rules, but not being dumB" is not sly for silliness but learning discovery. thus thinking cap and conclusion for what's set as "party haT" can get attention well. Congratulations for the silver evaluation.

    singable colors for scrolling,
    babies aare my subject


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    Very very clever and creative. A well earned trophy. Congratulations. Well done. ~Pamela

  • Sunshine Princess
    March 13, 2008
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    This is nice acrostic have a nice day


  • alaskanamber
    March 6, 2008

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    Ok so I give you a challenge and you not only meet it but you exceed it. Great write poet. thanks for entering and good luck to you.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Haha I quite like this one, new form it seems... really is different and looks kinda fun! Well done, best of luck xxxxx


    • garbait
      March 6, 2008
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      It's little different writing like this. I'm just glad I don't have an 8 mile screen name!

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