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Wanting you



Sparkling, like a thousand blue diamonds,
your eyes allure;
I cave, as a moth caught in lamplight.

Loving you,
is like breeze kissing a blister...

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sunflowerpoet

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Stunning - the brevity is touched so beautifully. I love the use of similes - does not feel bulky at all. I really feel the comparisons and although simple imagery - the emotions are spot on.
    Thanks for entering,