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Wishes are for wishing wells As hope is for the hopeless

A way to show you that your what I need
A way to show you, your the one that makes me weak
A little something to tell you I care
A little something called love we shared

A small dose of hate thrown into too much love
A small dose of mistakes to give the final shove

Heartbeats beating like never before
Heartbeats shut out by a heartless door
Wishing, hoping, for a new fate to be created
Wishing, hoping, for the pain to lead to sedation

Weakness shown in fury corrupted by this hate
Strength shown in forgiveness a little too late

Holding on to the memories kept locked inside
Holding on to don't let me go as I so long have cried
Leaving tortured beaten and bruised by a sad replace
Leaving scorned, unloved, laughed in my face


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  • Lola Lola
    September 9, 2008
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    beautifully written. i love your rythm with words.