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[ My only definition of romance is that somebody has to be willing to hold hands & jump off the clif

My only definition of romance is that somebody has to be willing to hold hands & jump off the cliff with you. At that point you dont want to die anymore---->Marilyn Manson

Standing still holding hope
Looking down twisting to jump
Missing that thing to keep me here
A voice I hear so loud and clear

A shadowed fear that I grasp in dark
A sad song sung to to leave a mark

Birds chirping with love thats gone
A fire burning inside to hold on
A friendly warmth grasped in my palm
A pull back to keep me calm

A whisper in my ear to say I will go to
Withdrawal I make from the death to hold love as I do
Sensational mistakes forever replaced
An abundance of joy sheltered and safe

A jump of the cliff to a distant dream
Waking up next to my love with a silent scream

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  • patrick20traveler
    March 11
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    Great ending and a feeling of relief.

  • The-Rejected
    July 7, 2008
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    Wow! that was AWESOME!!!!


  • lizwicker
    March 25, 2008

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    wow

    Wow i so loved this, love the qoute love the whole thing.. the last line was the best.. i loved the way you ended it.. thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Rock-Junkie
    March 24, 2008

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    niiiicceee. being a liker of Marilyn Manson and all, this is a good write. ~technically Soft Cell did Tainted Love but oh well~ he did a good version of it!
    great job and good luck

  • Ale E
    March 10, 2008

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    Wow I really enjoyed this piece. And I absolutely loved the quote.

    A jump of the cliff to a distant dream
    Waking up next to my love with a silent scream- that was a terrific way to end this poem.

    Thank you very much for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.

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