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Deception

Deception is sitting across the table from us,
Defying it's common lusts,
Oh not lying for what it's worth,
But scheming in it's mind,
Deception in a single form,
Unmoving and unchanging,
No second chances,
'Cause that would give a chance one too many,

Deception is sitting across the table from us,
It's wicked ways charming,
We're being tricked too late to say,
The thrawl has already been entered,
But deception is a tricky thing,
A blanket over fire,
If there is but one hole there,
The fire rages on,

Scheming deception too late to see,
It's own fatal mistake,
Been caught out,
And once again,
Thrust into isolation,
Deception will come back one day,
Smarter in a way,
And it will work it's spell again,
Just as easily as today,
But if one thing has been learned,
It's not to trust at first,
So guard youself against it,
Because it's coming back for us,

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It's my own personal views on liars. Hope you all like it!
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Comments

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    This was done really well! Thank you for this lovely entry. All the best. PS. Allot of debth of someone your age. Im very impressed!


  • KayJay
    March 19, 2008
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    Very nicely put. Good write.
    Ken


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 6, 2008
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    beautiful


  • carmel apple
    March 6, 2008
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    I love it!!!!
    YOu made it personal!!!
    Good job


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Liars are very much to me what you have penned... you have done it well and written so powerfully... this is amazing... omg what have I released?!? lol! well done Twinny

    Loves you xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    lairs are brittle and rotten inside they make cover up masks to hide whats really eating them away. a powerful write my beautiful sis

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