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[ Walking through the dark night ]

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Walking through the dark night

not sure of what will come next

patrolling forward of the safe zone

to confirm that the area is clear

Then an ambush kicks off

your training takes over

you fight through and mop up the survivors

take them back to base

The interegation starts

you find out they are the tip of a large sword

coming down on your position

fast and hard

call forward your reserves

to cope with the onslaught

you know not all will survive

but thats what were paid for

Whether you believe in the cause

or the rhyme or reason for you being there

you carry on for the sake of your brothers in arms

to save a their life rather than let them take it

The battle begins

and its all over in a flash

you've survived and your team are beside you

adrenalin has seen you through

your injured but dont feel it

after battle the adrenalin has gone

 you start to shake uncontrollably

nothing you can do but wait it out

5 minutes pass you grab a coffee

have a chat with your mates

and make fun of it

thats what it is all about

camaraderie!

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  • no holds barred in this one......

    To tell of days past experiences in such a fashion, brings home the reality of days lost in those adrenalin rushes.  

    No stepping back and walking away in this one Bro, as is the call of many.   To take presidence over all fears brings honour and courage to the fore, where all warriors stand side by side.   Only to be caught in humour when the battle is won, again.  

     

    Spot on recognition and superlatively expressed.  

     

    keep it up Bro, impressed to the hilt.

     

    Silent Cougar. 

  • yes i would have to agree with tender wolf i almost cried imaging this, i am sorry if you ever need a shoulder then i am here for you
    blessing
    thank you
    shannon

    • GrowlingBear gold member
      March 6
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      Thank You

      It's ok I am stronger than you think, in my profession you try to let these things leave your head with satirical comedy ....and it works!
  • OMG!!!

    your words have pulled the heart right out me!!...how brave and noble you are my brother...you have painted such a heart breaking picture with your words and I found myself holding my breath! Niaish for sharing your heart with me otc winner wrote all over it


    • GrowlingBear gold member
      March 6
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      Thanks

      I tried to tell it as it is ....I hope it came across that way.
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