My dear wolf don't cry ,
My dear wolf of the shinning moon night ,
You shall remain with me and walk the woods tonight,
Tell me what hurts you, and I shall fix your pain ,
Show your love it might be better instead,
My wolf don't cry,
As your sins shall disappear into the air tonight ,
Walk with me into the mist of night,
We shall walk towards the shadows and follow the moon light,
Don't cry my wolf I'm here for you ,
Don't howl , and if you do make sure it's nice and loud,
Be proud , make a small sound ,
I shall find what hurts you and save you tonight ,
Now heel my lover ,
As I slowly rub your fur on your neck ,
I start to bite you slowly and intense ,
As your lover and Vampire,
I shall suck in your sins in blood ,
Tonight you will be reborn again ,
And be immortal for life with no more pain
A contest entry
- ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think ?
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Yeah, thanks for entering.
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Wow this is good. I was surprised with the ending. That is a good way to keep your readers attention.
Welcome to the AP. I will look forward to more of your writings.
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Thank you so much
Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and may thy be blessed .
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Beautiful. Welcome again new poet. may AP assist your muse and help you grow as a poet and a person. Thank you for sharing
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Thank you
Thank you for your comment may thy be blessed as well ..
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