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Shattered dreams and lost hopes
Many tears just cant cope
Endless nightmares of what use to be
Come back home hold me sweetie!

Time is ticking just cant sleep
Bruised not broken, sore and scared
shadows of lust and to many “im sorry‘s”
Never knew what all love could do

Wounds to deep no one can heal
Voices that creep leaves you with chills
Day dreams and  shivers
Wind blowing all to fast

Never new how long such a pain could last
Make-up and lies, its all apart of the play
Scene after scene trying to make life ok
Nights alone just locked in the room

Wonder how long till he finds you again
Holding your breath more than you ever thought you could
In your own arms you say “it will be ok”
Another lie another story who ever knew love could destroy[?]

Shattered dreams and lost hope
Many tears just cant cope
Endless nightmares of what use to be
Come back home hold me sweetie!

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so yeah idk know i was getting really with this one it just happened!

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Powerful Emotions,

    Truly a heart-felt piece of your broken heart.
    I thank you for sharing here, and feel it's great to pen your feelings out.
    Keep up the wonderful works, though painful, they bring healing.

    Peace, much love, Dad.

  • Justin3
    March 6, 2008

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    This is a very emotional write, the words flow wonderfully and it is as raw as words can get.The sadness and frustration explodes in your face which is wonderful.Great write!


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 6, 2008
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    Myself? I find that I

    I can so understand and can relate to your feeling very well. I have felt these same agonies more than once., but that should tell you one thing right there,...... it too will pass.

    Love is its own entity , it comes and goes as it wills. You might read Kahil Gibran's "The Prophet" passage under "Love".... "So as love crowns you so may it crucify you...."

    Good write