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Haiku #2

Vibrant red orange,
Royal blue, soft light glowing
Through beautiful eyes.

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT


  • ukelova
    March 16, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL

    Hello there.

    You beautiful eyes have painted a beautiful haiku of a sunset and a lovely sky. Your words are soft and sensual.

    Good luck in the contest from a fellow contestant.

    have a gr8 day,
    BJ.


  • flight
    March 8, 2008
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    You've created a great image here!!
    I like it
    peace to all ~flight