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Taken Away

Without you I'm nothing.
I'm the Dust kicked up in a Summer Storm.
I'm the house Ravaged by the Tornado.
I'm the girl who had no choice.
My foundation wasn't strong enough.
I was weak.
I know WE didn't have a choice.
But out relationship stays strong.
You didn't want to leave.
But you were takin away.
Not by the hands of Fate,
But by the hands of My Enemy.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 16, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I took this as a death ending but then realised it could also be taken as a love ending, stolen partners are a hard thing to deal with and I like who you have penned that.


    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda