She is more than a thought
She is more than A kiss
Why can't you see who she really is
Her Eyes
There meant to get lost in
Her beauty
To great to ever be framed
Because the beauty we look for
The beauty should come from the inside
When in her arms
You should feel invincible
When in her dreams
You should be unbeatable
When in love
"I love you" should never come from the mouth
It should come from your eyes
From your actions
from your heart
When your with her
She should feel
Safe
Happy
Loved
In your arms
She should feel invincible
When in your dreams
She should be unbeatable
When she kisses you
ALL you should feel
Is the butterflies in your stomach
Not just the first time
but the 5th
the 20th
the 1,000th
The Last time
She is more than a thought
She is more than A kiss
Don't worry I know who she really is
Author notes
For Contest... Not sure if this is what you're looking for, if not i have another piece i can submit!
--- Theory of The Lost
A contest entry
- BFFL's Birthday!!!! (I REALLY NEED ENTRIES PLZ!) by Jeneralix.
900 points, ended March 9, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems for me and my boyfriend by Chanson belle.
550 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aww cute
yeah this is like what i wanted
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This is an amazing poem. You did a really good job writing this. I loved every single part of it. Great poem!
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i really really liked this poem..and im dead serious.
everything in that poem is VERY true. does this poem remind you of Ashley?
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I really really really like this, specially that last stanza bit [= [= [=
We haven't spoke in ages, how are you?
♥
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Thanks for entering!!!!
I really like this
Not quite exactly what I'm looking for but I can totally make do with this. ...She'll love it
May I put it in the book?
I will come back and comment more. Promise
And feel free to enter again. I totally dont mind
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Hehe I wasn't sure it would fit but if you like it you can put it in the book!! Thanks for the Applause!!
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