No matter where I g *hic* o
no matter what I d *hic* o,
these darn hiccups
always make me bl *hic* ue.
I eat to fast, I get th *hic* em
can't help it, when I'm hun *hic* gry,
I can't seem to get rid of them
get worse, when I drink cof *hic* fee.
I always seem to get them
they come from out of the bl *hic* ue,
let me see you try to ta *hic* lk
they'll catch you off guard t *hic* oo.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.5/2008
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LOL, I'm laughing for two reasons, one: your poem is very funny, but two: this reminded me of an old story I wrote about a talking cow and how she kept interjecting a "moo" in between words, like "I am "moo" a crazy "moo" kind of cow.
Yeah, I'm weird, lol

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very clever
this is funny
when i get hiccups it hurts so having hiccups is a
misserable thought for me...
good write though
thank you for entering!!
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I hate having the hiccups. I love this poem, though!


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I liked this. Well done. ~Pamela


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Great!
This made me laugh so hard that cofee blew out of my nose
(auch).
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lol this is cute good luck


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LOL> You are going to gve me hiccups.

Not very nice, great poem though. I love *hic* it
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