Woman gathers flowers
to put on her mother's grave,
she holds back her tears
tries her best to be brave.
"Mom, I miss you so much
it's been years, since I saw your face,
you left my life so suddenly
and left without a trace."
She lays the flowers down
kisses her mother's name,
"I love you, dear mother
thank you for the life you gave."
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Feb.26/2008
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Sad, especially
"Mom, I miss you so much
it's been years, since I saw your face,
you left my life so suddenly
and left without a trace."
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My mom is almost 84 and still spry like a spring chicken but my fears are there for that day when I'll be in your protagonists place. I am not looking forward to that.
You put a tear in my eye...stop that !
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EXellent
A lovely but sad poem about the bereavement and love of a daughter for her mother.Nicely worded rhymed and flowed thank you for sharing it with me I quite liked it see if you like my "Her Smile"or"Little Girl"or even "Values" GOOD LUCK George(JUDMC)U.K. -
This is a beautiful tribute. I hope that one day my children might love me enough to do something like this for me. We all want to be remembered.
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Such a wonderfully written sad write. This is very good
Good luck with it in the contest. Man the emotions of this Awesome !!
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wow, so powerful, so short. The amount of emotion and the range of emotions are absoutly stunning. Good use of short words. Thank you cynthia
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