Fragile virgin petals
Cupped in beaten hands
Delicate
Heaven sent blossom
Always held close to the heart
By workers hands
Author notes
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I like the contradiction of images you've portrayed. Soft and rough. A little short of word limit but beautiful none the less.
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Lovely poem Very good imagery.
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Commentary
First and foremost I liked you did a comparison and contrast of the flower to the hands. However, I will be somewhat critical about the form of possession in the last two lines of this poem: workers' hands
keep penning -
so softly stated... beautiful.
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Gracias....
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Now this is awesome.
I love it!
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nice take brilliant!
TAsha
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lovelt best of luck!
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This was beautifully done. Nice imagry. Good luck in the contest
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