Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
 

something...

 

 

 

Lips felt as if never kissed
body unused, and love
seemed too precious to endure;
as if the heft of breath might crush it.

She spoke of it
as if not breathing;
in wisps of thought
so that even time
would not press weight to injury.

Words came haltingly
in languages of hope and
accents of want, pride
drove the air from her depths
would not let the moment
lie unborn

she reached for Love
with both hands, and held
the rumors of yes, close to her heart
waited, in stilled pause;

and found from adoring eyes

and steadfast gaze,
had  something seeming precious, too.

 

 

 

Author notes

  

In a list

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • MariGoes gold member
    March 6

    Edit | Reply
    A poem like this one must have been inspired by love...What a tender way to talk about love!
    can't pick just one line, the whole poem is adorable. I'm sure who ever was in your mind when you wrote this, must be walking on clouds after reading you.

    Lovely


  • poet2angels silver member
    March 6

    Edit | Reply
    This is gorgeous!
    Such beautitiful lines that it is impossible to choose only a few to highlight...
    Another masterpiece by an artist and his pen...
    Thank you!!!
    Lynda


  • pania gold member
    March 6

    Edit | Reply
    Beautifully written thoughts, /and love seemed too precious to endure; as if the weight of breath might crush it/, how fragile love can seem, yet it is the strength of the world.


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 6

    Edit | Reply
    "would not let the moment
    lie unborn" > love this line so much.

    ...had to come back and read again...
    so excellent...

  • shuvi
    March 6

    Edit | Reply
    This is SO pretty!!!

    Me likey lots

    Love and cheers, shuvi


  • Nature Song silver member
    March 5

    Edit | Reply
    I have to agree with Wanda! Amazing and breath taking words to describe love of a dear poet friend. Wonderful tribute...~Sie


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 5

    Edit | Reply
    "she reached for Love
    with both hands, and held
    the rumors of yes, close to her heart
    waited, in stilled pause;"

    This is so befitting of Lynda, Poet. Love reaches back, with both arms embracing her dreams, nurturing her hopes, clarifying her knowledge. Good luck in the contest. Wanda


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 5
    Edit | Reply
    very beautiful...

1 - 8 of 8