A vague emptiness.
An Explosion of Space.
Words suspended in the Never,
Only wishing to be heard.
Time is still
Hanging forever in Oblivion
Suspended without a whisper of sound.
Only wishing to gaze into the light.
Darkness is forever.
Blindly searching for a trace of love
Hoping to one day find peace,
In Loves smiling embrace.
But Love,
Love is constant
Beautiful and Everlasting
A gentle melody against ones soul
Pushing through the barriers of Fear and Hate.
An exotic spice to the senses.
And the shine in Her eyes.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes.......But it has to have emotion by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes....the second time... by Nikki Rowles.
600 points, ended June 13, 2008, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your second stanza was breath taking! the metaphors used were simply "to die for" it was off the hook okay!!! And your last stanza... wow, mindblowing! awesome job dude... and keep writing kays! >.<
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Beautifully breath taking...very well written.....thank you for entering....agian....I love it.....
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Absolutely exquisite. Beautiful poem. I loved how you led up to love. Posing all these dark, threatening things that trap the heart, and then destroying their ominious walls with "An exotic spice to the senses." Good stuff.
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Beautifuly breath taking, many kudos...
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BREATH TAKING
found myself holding my breath and then loosing a little sigh
...such beauty flowing from your golden pen my son
Niaish for sharing with me and being so wonderful
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