Today's your birthday
Let out a cheer and a whoop
Remember everyone who cares about you
Do anything you want to do
Fly up in a hot air baloon
Break all the rules
Because it's your day
You get to choose
Wear weird clothes
Eat your whole cake
Just remember to celebrate
17th birthdays don't come around everyday
So sing a song and party today
Author notes
yourhot21 is my username for the contest
A contest entry
- BFFL's Birthday!!!! (I REALLY NEED ENTRIES PLZ!) by Jeneralix.
900 points, ended March 9, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatcha thinkin'
Comments
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Wonderful poem. Very cheerful. I like the part about do anything you want to do. I also like the part let out a cheer and a whoop. Fun poem to read. Thanks.
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Sweet! i like it a lot!
You did a really good job and thanks for entering
I'll come back and comment more later. Promise 
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That's totally me on my birthday!
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