Fall's delight
Glimmers
On the veins
Of autumn
Glittering by the sunset
As another fall day ends
Author notes
17 words
A contest entry
- Picture prompt---17 words by Charity Ann.
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Well you sure summed up autumn in
just a few words.
" Glittering by the sunset
As another fall day ends ".
Very beautiful.
Great job and good luck.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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the vines of the leaves are pronounced as the crisp and fall nice image here...
Cyber Artist
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very nice but the imagery for me performed a 'blurred entry/exit' so I re-read it again and only then did the languid images come to mind
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i love the autumn... and i can just picture this~ dew droplets on fall leaves... wonderful!
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I did mention it was morning...maybe I should hold it against you!
Just kidding! Thanks again for taking the time to enter.
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Should fix it. Would make you happy???
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I like it, although it was morning...I neglected to mention that so I won't hold it against you! I like how you use the phrase "veins of autumn," and I like your use of the word "glimmers." Thanks for the entry and good luck!
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