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Surpised is my eyes, accepted is my heart

Glowing in the sudden warmth of morning rise
Crisp entry toward the loving glade
The blades bow and shine in acknowledgement
The leaves brighten with smiles
The wind sings with free joy
Birds chirp from pools of heavenly springs

Pink fades in the mist
Blue colors the void
Purple, green, blue, red flowers fill with silent hums

All to brighten a new day in Spring's find

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Surprised by Fritzl H.

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    March 8, 2008
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    Very visual with its colours and sounds...
    you give nature her voice and gown in these lines.
    Spring is at our doorstep making this write not
    only apt to image chosen, but to season & mood too.
    Blue


    PS-There is NO more editing to be done on this now.