When gazing at your ethereal smiles,
An inch of grace turns into miles,
This unreal feeling in my veins,
This ecstasy I can't contain...
Should my words get lost when I speak,
I'll explain by kissing your cheek,
And when life seems to be too hard,
I'll guide you to my loving arms,
And even though we are still young,
Soon air won't rest within our lungs,
And every second I'm with you,
Proves that this feeling must be true,
I'll be with you throughout our days,
And you'll keep my cold heart ablaze,
And as I've said, right from the start,
My love; You'll always have my heart.
A contest entry
- Teenagers [Kids] In Love by Rilly.
550 points, ended March 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Damn, Zach. You always know how to make me smile and cry all at the same time. I'm glad you're so in love. I wish you'll have the feeling forever. It sucks not to.
Great poem. You're the best. Shut up, don't even try. You're waaayyyy better than me.
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Lol...trust me youre a way better poet than i'll ever be. And you have a TON of talent so i know that you can become a great writer someday; especially with as good as you are now! Just dont dissapoint me with my book; thats supposed to be finished in 2 and a half months!!!!! Get on it
Anyways, you know how to brighten my day 
. thank you; i actually kinda needed some confidence today...
Anyways, you are an amazing poet and stop it~! You will always be better than me!
Just give me another poem that i can read soon...life's getting a little boring! -
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ppppppsssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh
But thanks.
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only one i've read today worth reading =]]
a bright love shines through your words, and of course. i love the simple ending. =]
rilly
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lovely
This is so sweet. It sounds like true love. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Nice poem.
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