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Forever Loving You

The times we shared
Had meant so much
The way you cared
Showed through your touch

The late night phone calls
Showed out connection
What we did behind walls
Was pure perfection

You friendship meant so much to me
I will cherish every moment we had
And hopefully someday you will see
It was worth both the good times and the bad

You are engraved into my soul
And there you will forever stay
You have helped make me whole
And I will think of you each and every day

Pat, I will forever love you and cherish our memories. Hope someday we can be the friends we used to be.

Your everlasting friend,
Mindie

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  • Unclearless
    March 8, 2008
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    Wow.

    I think this has to be some of your best work ever!! There is so much honesty and emotion, my eyes began to well up a bit. poems like this that come straight from the heart I seem to love the best. You are so amazing in so many way's, it is really hard to desribe! Once again wow!

    With love,

    ~Kevin~


  • penman gold member
    March 6, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very touching and wonderfully expressed. So nice to share the meaning of friendship.

  • Owl33
    March 5, 2008

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    Very heartfelt words to this person who has done so much for and with you! I hope the both of you can work things out and be the friends you were! You have a big heart and it shows here!