You told me
my smile was welcoming.
So why’d you turn to the one
who poured his frown
into a pit filled
with patheticness?
I’m not going to add any more device here
[since my effort doesn’t matter anyways]
I’m just gonna simply say –
bias bastard!
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 14, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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ha ha. sarcastic humour is well placed in this contest. I'm no bias bastard but a subjective son ofa bitch. I like the effort. I am one for the shortnes here.
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AWESOMENESS at its best!!! haha. loved this... totally!
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Thanks !
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INDEED!
I wonder why they say that they loved it if .. man, you know what I mean.
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Great little bit o anger there Ryan. I always wonder why I don't read more of your work but it always comes down to time these days. Well done.
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I love your poetry! And I'm sure you have a nice smile, even though I can't see one in your picture.
Your effort does matter and that's why you're so awesome...because you at least TRY!
Hope you birthday was great!
~Cassie
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Excellent
Oh my you sure vented with this piece. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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