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Without Innocence

To know everything
is to know nothing at all
To understand the world
is to never know why
Why live & learn? If born wise...

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♥ ^.^ Innocence: you don't know what you have until you've lost it.
PROMPT: “It is innocence that is full and experience that is empty. It is innocence that wins and experience that loses.” - Charles Peguy

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  • Kyo-N
    March 5, 2008

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    And your work is good here... but... I'd replace the & for an "And" particle (Unless you like Dirty Pretty style). And your last question... speechless. I'm trying to find an answer to that.


    • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
      March 5, 2008
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      Lol

      NO I love & cuz its PRETTY lmso I wont change it to and I hate like being technical about English I think it ruins the point of poetry being expression! =] Thx for the sweet comment thoughhhh much love =] u look like a kid in my school lmso!