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Blind Sight

My eyes like empty sockets
fall upon the nothingness
that surrounds my soul
Wordless speeches,
put together from the bottom of the abyss
cry out soundlessly,
into the void of lost control.
Causes lost, and causes won,
collect like raindrops on the sun
forever forgotten before they run
into rivulets of steaming flow

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  • Deathless1
    March 6, 2008

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    this is so sad and great. you have alot of talent.
    thank you on the comment, would love to get more from ya. i really am in aw by this one.
    KNIGHT TIME