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Tears

She cries
For the boy
She cries
Her tears falling
Down her shirt
On here chest
On her heart
And sinks right through
She cries
Because she finally was happy
For the frist time in life
Lost in his smile
Memorized by his eyes
She cries
For his love
She cries
She cries
Shes cries

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  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 15, 2008
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    Nicely done. Great write. Thanks for the entry.


  • LeonLiondas
    March 9, 2008

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    Nicley done

    This is a very nice write.
    I enjoyed it very much.
    There is but one error... a typo on line 6 (I belive you meant to say HER chest rather than here chest.

    Thanks for sharing


  • captain howdy
    March 6, 2008
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    such a sad poem. It is nicely writ, and I wish you the best in your contest.