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Rainbows Mystery

Clouds are painting the sky
for me,
Their brushes
dipped in light,
Draw in the sun
and erase the trees,
Colours flow
from air smudges of white,
As their brushes
are washed,
in puddles of rain,
Stained glass colours
seep through,
and are exhibited again,
For human hearts and eyes
to see,
The wonder and magic,
that is the rainbows natural mystery

Author notes

This is for the Rainbow Contest. Picture Credit : Cafekko http://cafekkodeviantart.com/art/Rainbow-59584976

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  • aboomer silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    Just stopped back to say Congrats. on the well-deserved Silver!!!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    March 10, 2008

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    The mystery of a beautiful rainbow...you have given it magic...sighs...im so thrilled you won a trophy...excellent in every-way


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    Congrats on the silver!

    A wonderful piece, I like the title. You picked a great theme, rainbows are mysterious. I like the way you approached this, painting the scene as you go. Beautiful imagery throughout. Congrats on a very well deserved silver


  • RainbowGirl257
    March 8, 2008

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    oh wow!, i love the first line especially! i agree with the part about how mysterious rainbows are. a great write. good luck and thanks for entering!

  • aboomer silver member
    March 6, 2008
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    (for some reason, I couldn't pull up the pic to this and then I lost your page!!)

    This is just so lovely! Your wording and images are beautiful! I love the image of the clouds painting the sky and all the great images you put with that....just beautiful!
    best wishes in your contest.

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