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Okaasama (Mother)

Warm place before
Warm benefactress later
Thundering beneath the fear
Succoring her creation

Author notes

"Mother" used as a prompt.

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Very Good

    Beautiful sentiment -- A nice tribute to mom. With such few words you expressed great meaning. Toni


  • Little Blue Bird
    April 4, 2008
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    Niaish (thank you) for sharing

    Thank you for entering the contest and good luck. (2 applause I am out of points)


  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008

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    Words are stunning here, very poetic and it painted a very good picture. I love it. Thundering beneath the fear


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    March 5, 2008
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    Woah

    haha weirdddd I love it though teha =] <3


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    How immensely creative and engaging.... x Thanks so very much for sharing and many blessings to you. Lavender Butterfly.

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