Fallen ~
A forgotten whisper
softly curving towards the end;
Coloured now
from time’s own face
showing signs of change.
My thoughts ~
drift too
with every turning leaf;
and they follow each other
in the wind…
A contest entry
- BODY, MIND AND SOUL! by LadyLavender.
575 points, ended March 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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powerful imagery...lovely, truly lovely.
Good luck and thankyou for entering. -
Sigh this is just beautiful hun, my thoughts follow each other on the breeze too, sometimes it is a gust and I never get them back.... beautifully penned sweets,goodluck in the contest
Karen
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thsi is amazing your words are short but carry so nuch depth with alot of thought. beautifully written mommy
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Excellent!
Beautiful read for the heart inscribed by the soul.
Thanks for sharing you, and you pen so wonderfully!
-Timothy
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