Sweet desires
Peak on the tip of my tongue
Longing to voice
The faintest I love you
Though you are out of touch
I know soon our loving hearts
Shall weave a mat of love
Over the miles
Me and you
In a never ending nightmare
Ceased only by the thought
That someday, someway we will be together again
Author notes
Love
Me
You
Together
Soon
Never
Option 5
In a list
A contest entry
- Writes for My AP Daughter... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended August 1, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful! So much meaning in your words...you said so much in brevity and I love it...very touching and true...
Thank you for sharing your support ...
mystic
(she will be judging this when it closes) -
I shall
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only if you take this one out
One entry per person -
Pretty good
I liked all of it but I didn't love it
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Can I try again?
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