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Hush now my baby

Hush now my baby,please be still.
It's already hard enough without my will.
Hush now my baby, please don't cry.
If you do your mommy might die.
Hush now mybaby, please don't forget,
That you were never my regret.
Hush now my baby, remember to keep away,
From grandma, she made me leave today.
Hush now my baby, I must leave,
But but you must always remember to believe.
Hush now my baby, I promise I'll return,
But there is so much about me I must learn.
Hush now baby, time to sleep,
Try not to see your mommy weep.

Author notes

lullaby, im aj.vampire, this poem is basically describing the way i have lived, in fear, and by the end i would have to leave what i love to be free.

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Really short, just what i was thinking

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  • GodsTrueSoldier
    March 10, 2008

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    wow, I love this! i reallly luve this....the emotion was purely beautiful, the repition was immesnely effetive, the words where touching, the meaning was moving! I loved this soo much, definatly one o fmy favourite entrie!!! very wel done thanks for entring!