Smiling flowers
always admire us
Speaking bird
for ever amuses us
The infant that started
its journey to earth
cries initially
only to lead a happy life there after
The infant resembles a flower bud
and to a bird, just in the nest
as a new entry to the nature's fold
All these children represent GOD
WHY to keep this one as an exception to my love!
let it breath our delight
and live in our lives like a beckon light
Author notes
Option 4~
Base your poem on the picture above
A contest entry
- Options [PIF] by Beauty Of Silence.
650 points, ended March 19, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good job! This was an amazing poem with great depth! Your words were real pure with genuine emotions! Powerful imagery and i love your comparison of a child to a flower! simply lovely! kids are heavenly aren't they?
Well, thanks for this entry! best wishes!
Much love always,
Ranji
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