Mind spins
in stressed spirals
seeking
the silent comfort
of his eyes.
When sleep escapes
my grasp,
it is,
the soothing lullaby
of his voice
I crave
and my eyes,
sink to submerge
in the refuge
of his embrace.
In a list
A contest entry
- BODY, MIND AND SOUL! by LadyLavender.
575 points, ended March 14, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I thnk this is vry beautiful A sensual journey that gives comfort Very well done!
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The essence of love indeed...uniting the body mind and soul!
Beautiful, Bel. Like a sigh of passion.
Bravo!
Marianne -
This hits!
This hits, body,mind and soul. i felt the beauty of this and sensuality. very well written.
"and my eyes,
sink to submerge
in the refuge
of his embrace"
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good stuff
very nice and image-filled piece!
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a sort of centering
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oooo la la
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