a babe's wonderland,
so sweet and innocent,
hope floating like bubbles
in a clear summer breeze,
restoration is just a matter
of perfecting traits letting go
and letting the mind
of God's child take control
for a wondrous adventure,
there are hand held dreams,
and wonderful schemes
and the merriment of forever
dancing on shades of yesterday
Author notes
pic- Argot http://riverofwords.org/gallery/2007/08.html
In a list
A contest entry
- SImple pic prompt quickie by StarLightResurrects.
540 points, ended March 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Oh my goodness.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
This is such a beautifully and perfectly penned piece of poetry.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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oh this is beautiful and you have used clea similies and wording to create life for the picture well done
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though im not really sure what you mean in this poem, i think that the similes you've used are beautiful. thank u for entering and good luc
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Best I've seen on the entire site since I entered into this land of dreamers.
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