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Violin's Lullaby

Elegance in four strings
Let the soul take flight
In the language of Romantics
And those who stay from sight

Consider this, peace and grace
Mercy Acceptance, Heart
A tit for tat, a list fast paced
Of listing all the pretty things
This vibrant thing creates

It can shatter a nation
It can build up the walls
Of intimacy, kind succulent
Or it can spill a mesmerizing call

Feel it wrap around your ears
Letits soft hold embrace
You as you let go of reality
As it kisses all of the face.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 7, 2008
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    Wow, powerful write, but please state in your notes what form you wrote this in...thanks