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Desert (ed)

The sweet scent of desert flowers blooming floats across the breeze

mingling with the reek of cigarette smoke and car exhaust

I squint against the glare of the harsh sunlight off a car windshield

and wonder again why I live in this place

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  • This has a lot of potential. Finish it.