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7 colors
Flowing,
Bright,
Beautiful.
Almost
as if,
it is a slide,
with tiny
pixie fairies,
living in the timy
crevices inside
the clouds.
The rainbow
is their slide
in the playground.
The tops of the
clouds are their
trampolines.
The sun is their
bright, but beautiful
tanning bed.
The whole sky
is their swimming pool.
And at night,
the treetops
is their swingset,
gently swaying in the breeze.
The shooting stars
are their rockets,
and the moon
is their sandbox.
When they go to bed
in their cloud houses,
and tuck their little ones
in to sleep,
they thank God
for a wonderful world
that he created for them.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    March 8, 2008

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    i like the short and snappy lines and the appropriately named title. Your poem is very descriptive with lots of good adjectives! well done, good luck and thanks for entering!