Was today
The final day?
Or was it the beginning
Of a new era,
Full of terrorizing,
And destroying,
My friend?
A nasty pair of eyes.
Staring me in the face.
Full of realization?
Or just full of curiosity?
Did she get it?
Or is she still entangled
In the ropes of
confusion?
Being the friendly foe that she is,
She sit there and stares,
Leaving us in the dark,
wondering.
Finally,
With a sigh relief,
She comes to join us,
Smiling, with her "staring" face gone.
Did our message get across?
Author notes
Dedicated to katie, although i am afraid that this poem is terrible.
Suggestions as to HOW to fix it are welcome.
so?
Comments
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haha i thought this was about me at first. hold on im gonna read it again. okay yeah this is a really really good poem. Some parts are a bit confusing though. I think the beginning could use some work.
Was today
The final day?
Or was it the beginning
Of a new era,
Full of terrorizing,
And destroying,
My friend?
That part I don't really get. But I'm not sure how you could fix it. But other than that, thanks for the poem dedication, *squee!*
*KT*
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